Zen Forest,
review by Lavinia Inbar, Poetry Canada Review
Carolyn Zonailo's Zen Forest
is a densely packed collection of poems about spiritual experience.
The experience of death is one of the central concerns. In "A
Question Of Faith," the "fear of dying" is dealt
with defiantly:
If the world must end
let it end
with me in your arms
held in this willing embrace
that defies
at least momentarily
the final explosion.
There is also a kind of defiance in "A Secular Ishmael's
Elegy" which tells of the "sudden and violent deaths"
of three poets:
The poems from their youth
will continue to speak against tyranny
for tyranny, in any form, is a mimic of death.
However, in "Woman Walking Dog" there is the glimmer
of a more spiritual and less emotional experience of death:
And her search for a way to face
death
with grace, to go alone
into that darkness
is an act beyond contemplation.
Martha's courage, sure as grace,
shines as a light on the unknown
The middle section of Zen Forest
is full of superstitious invocations against suffering and death
such as: "A sooth for the evil-eye," "Charm to
ward off the grim reaper," and "Chant to give comfort
in extreme pain." While most of the chants and spells are
a fearful and emotional response, they still represent a spiritual
searching as much as do the courageous and dignified actions of
the "Woman Walking Dog."
It is the final third of the book
which contains aspects of Zen as is suggested in its title. In
"Climbing" we encounter the Zen-inspired attitude of
the mountain climbers who are
...going toward
the top of the mountain
just for the sheer joy of it
In other poems Zonailo dabbles in Zen koans: "If the bowl
is empty/ is it an almost perfect space?" and "How much
rain can the angel hold/in the palm of his hand?" Besides
the Zen poems, this last section has still more poems on the subject
of death.
The book concludes with a long
poem about Vancouver's beaches which is full of spiritual experiences
usually involving memory. "City By The Sea" (made up
of seven medium length poems), is sometimes weakened by sloppy
imagery such as in
...images
that have become tangled
like a web
The tangled web is a tired cliché and in this case makes
for an inaccurate simile as well since webs are actually rather
ordered affairs.
After the meatier poems dealing
with death and suffering, the littoral experience of the final
poem seems unimportant, a weak conclusion to an otherwise spiritually
vigorous collection.
Copyright by Lavinia Inbar: www.carolynzonailo.com,
2004. |